The story was kind of original when it wasn't taking parts from both Max Payne and Address Unknown from Max Payne, even most of the soundtrack was off the Max Payne 2 OST. The presentation was nice though, reminded me of Sin city. Improvements should be on quality of the voice acting & sound effects and originality for the story & soundtrack.
As a fan of both the Max Payne games I actually found this quite good, my only gripes are that it is A- too short and B- the image quality is a little lacking, overall though it's entertaining.
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